Bullet 重写(英文交付 + 中文解读)
改前
Did NLP research with my professor.
改后
First-author NeurIPS 2025 paper on extractive self-supervised learning under Prof. X (12 weeks Stanford NLP exposure).
中文解读:原句太弱,没量化也没体现独立性。改后突出 独立一作 + 顶会 + Stanford NLP 圈的关系,正面回应 program 想看到的"独立 research"。